When you are negotiating your commercial debt burden, it helps if you can “sell your story.” What I mean is that the other person you are negotiating with will likely only know you as a voice on the other end of the phone line. If you can inject story elements into the process, you will get the other person on your side to some degree. If you ever watch reality-TV shows, you will notice that those contestants with a grandparent in the hospital with a terminal disease always seem to garner more votes. It is because the viewers are rooting for them. They have successfully introduced story elements into their struggle. This is similar to the effect I am talking about.
After you set the stage, it is preferable to proceed with the process entirely in writing. You have planted the story seed and now you want to control the presentation with written communications.
By submitting a proposal in writing that appears to be a standard settlement letter, this reflects a financially desperate debtor who may not be able to keep his doors open, yet wants to try to “do the right thing” towards the creditor by paying as much as possible (as a matter of character).
These entities are not as motivated to put a lot of time into this particular collection account. Obviously, if the collection attorney or agency cannot realize a large fee, they will take a small fee and dispose of the case. It is clearly an issue of time management relative to the fee they earn.
In order to “sell the story” your position must present the personal side of your dilemma. This may seem contradictory to the preconceived notion that collection attorneys and agencies have no feelings and do not care about your problems. They are only interested in collecting the highest possible amount owed since their fee is going to be larger and that is how they make their money.
However, we know the poser of story, so it should be used whenever possible.
André Larabie